Nice way
Being raw and unfamiliar
Yet the approach was cavalier
I had before me bunch of poems for evaluation
The herculean task to deal with human relation
So nice way of putting
Yet no underway cutting
Keeping woes to self and within
He has confined to contentment scene
Not all may succeed
And fail to heed
But Jag*(the world) has been won (jeet)
I rate book as completely fit
Not all poets shall excel
Had they done unwell
But this poet has shown
And his ideas have flown
I may add "love carries message"
In all ages
Your book shall travel far
With peace and no more wars
I may add love carries message In all ages Your book shall travel far With peace and no more wars
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Oh, so nice of you, Sir! you have put the sea in a bowl..Thank you so much smile emoticon I feel very much obliged smile emoticon 2 hours ago