hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 52,594 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Boredom - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

You will feel boredom
Even if u reach stardom
Is there any sense or wisdom?
If there is restriction and no freedom

Individuality will be on vane
Total eclipse on thoughts and on brain
Guided by others on important matters
Reading on doted line by merely looking at letters

You have everything at your disposal
Daily new suggestions and big proposals
Acting on device which is so mechanical
Time may come when need advices only medical

Time and tide wait for none
Fame may be enjoyed for self and alone
It has to come by dint of pure ability
Not by simple praise or enough publicity

Wise may absorb with all its ills
Strong will power may prevail and kill
Simple arrogance and false pride
Not allowing unnecessary things to ride

It is sign of simple maturity
Not even small age may need clarity
It is wisdom and clear long vision
That may bring fame with clear precision

Nothing to hide and nothing to seek
Look so powerful and not to look weak
Almighty may help to achieve the goal
As diamonds are dug from thick black coal

You are product of mighty bless
Whatever you get may not be less
You may have long followers and name in press
Simple fact may emerge and you can’t suppress

High rise or fame is matter of essence
You may feel rightly with HIS presence
All names and honour may be useless in his absence
False stardom or freedom may have no sense


Comments about Boredom by hasmukh amathalal

  • Rookie Flames Of Desire Consumed By The Fire (1/1/2010 2:11:00 PM)

    Yes, we are bored because we have too much freedom and, on other occasions, just the opposite lol. It's hard to please oneself. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Anthony Feghaly (10/15/2009 11:10:00 AM)

    very intresting i like this poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sherri Coulter (9/21/2009 10:19:00 PM)

    thank you.................. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (9/17/2009 1:07:00 PM)

    Please favor me reading my new posts.
    Ms.N (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (9/17/2009 1:05:00 PM)

    ‘Total eclipse on thoughts and on brain…’

    Like tasteful new recipe thro’ wise thoughts with ingredients of words.
    Great learning Sir.
    Ten+++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sachin Goswami (9/13/2009 11:39:00 PM)

    You will feel boredom
    Even if u reach stardom
    Is there any sense or wisdom? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sagarika Shah (9/3/2009 9:34:00 PM)

    You will feel boredom
    Even if u reach stardom
    Is there any sense or wisdom?
    If there is restriction and no freedom..........10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Twinkle Vohra (9/3/2009 6:57:00 AM)

    You will feel boredom
    Even if u reach stardom
    Is there any sense or wisdom............10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Swatimalya Chattopadhyay (9/2/2009 12:33:00 PM)

    Our vision widens the horizon.If we get engrossed into routines, growth eludes us.
    Our purpose should be to reach the ultimate objective and ignore small routines, otherwise boredom is bound to come. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mystic Indian (9/1/2009 11:31:00 AM)

    intelligent rhyme, simple and vivid wit, taste remains in the mind, like a good coffee, long after you've had it. :) 10/10. Way to go Mister! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hema Ravi (9/1/2009 10:47:00 AM)

    High rise or fame is matter of essence
    You may feel rightly with HIS presence
    All names and honour may be useless in his absence
    False stardom or freedom may have no sense

    These words sum it all! Inspiring words to the reader. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Doha Ewiess (9/1/2009 6:43:00 AM)

    Nothing to hide and nothing to seek
    Look so powerful and not to look weak
    Almighty may help to achieve the goal
    As diamonds are dug from thick black coal

    this is the most stanza i liked...and in general, your poem is very meaningfull...and the rhyme is so nice...great interesting work friend :)

    I wish to get rid of the boredom i feel during vacations...lol! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Doha Ewiess (9/1/2009 6:43:00 AM)

    Nothing to hide and nothing to seek
    Look so powerful and not to look weak
    Almighty may help to achieve the goal
    As diamonds are dug from thick black coal

    this is the most stanza i liked...and in general, your poem is very meaningfull...and the rhyme is so nice...great interesting work friend :)

    I wish to get rid of the boredom i feel during vacations...lol! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Angelic Warrior (8/31/2009 9:08:00 PM)

    well that's one way to get rid of boredom.....interesting write....i'm sure that stars get bored....but hey they can just buy something to entertain them......though material matter is only amusing for a short while.....good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Omar Ibrahim (8/30/2009 8:21:00 AM)

    you are an incredible poet please teach me how you write! ! ! ! ? ? ? thanks alot for letting me read this piece......i like your poetry very much and i hope i can write like you one day... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Ravi Sathasivam (8/30/2009 4:55:00 AM)

    'You will feel boredom
    Even if u reach stardom
    Is there any sense or wisdom?
    If there is restriction and no freedom' That's great write.
    The poem is very good and the rhyme is great.
    Thanks for sharing with me (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Merna Ibrahim (8/29/2009 9:27:00 PM)

    The poem is fantastic and the rhyme is fantastic too...10
    Merna (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Edwina K (8/29/2009 7:24:00 AM)

    Even if u reach stardom
    Is there any sense or wisdom?
    If there is restrict.........10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sadia Hussain (8/28/2009 11:08:00 PM)

    Guided by others on important matters
    Reading on doted line by merely looking at letters....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ramdulari Sinha (8/28/2009 10:28:00 PM)

    Individuality will be on vane
    Total eclipse on thoughts and on brain...........10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 20, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 31, 2011


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