Bottle Poem by Rini Shibu

Bottle



A bottle full of wine
Nothing else to dine
She says it's fine
And this night is mine
She act like a model
Wearing her goggles
She swigs it from bottle
To lose consciousness in total

Friday, June 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: wine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 15 June 2018

My my a bottle is throttled. This bottle has lost its bottle! +++10

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Narayana Aghalaya 09 October 2018

bottle of wine -is like a one pot meal; nothing else matters and no one else is needed. Necessity invents. Nice poem!

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Edmund Strolis 01 September 2018

The great escape found in the bottle or in the trappings of a wardrobe. Shakespeare said the world is a stage and we are but players. The good news is we can choose to play along or rewrite the script.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 July 2018

She says it's fine! ! ! To dine with her. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 June 2018

I believe you don't drink but you have written a very good poem on wine.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 June 2018

Wearing her goggles bottle dances and this is amazing really...

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