Bottle In The Sea Poem by Rini Shibu

Bottle In The Sea

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Fill the drops rolling over your cheeks
In an empty bottle upto the brim
The more you fill, the more you feel lighter
But the bottle with tears wiegh heavier
Throw this pain into the sea
for never again you will see
It vanishes without leaving a stain
As the tide takes away all your pain

Friday, January 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: sea,tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laquory Jones 05 January 2018

Excellent Work Rini, thanks for sharing +10

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Rini Shibu 05 January 2018

Thanks Jones.. Rini

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Narayana Aghalaya 09 October 2018

while in sorrow, drink lots of water to recharge the tear glands; nice imagination: the agony is dumped in the ocean! lovely poem

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Robert Murray Smith 18 July 2018

Imaginative Rini. Reminds me of an old poem of mine Send the Blues Back.+10

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Kostas Lagos 09 January 2018

That 's a splendid poem! To throw your pains into the sea.Just great!

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Rini Shibu 09 January 2018

Life is very short font live in pain.. Thanks Kostas

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2018

...Throw this pain into the sea for never again you will see-Very rich expression Rini, Liked it!

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Rini Shibu 09 January 2018

Thank you so much Dillip for your comment.. Pain ruins ones life.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 January 2018

Pains! ! With tears! But hope lies ahead of you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 08 January 2018

Thanks Edward Kofi. Rini

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