The withered branches
Broken rhythms of my heart
Does she cares to know?
Beautiful read and as I am keen to write haikus, I loved reading this!
I adore haikus. they look so simple but they are difficult to write. So few words are used it takes a skilled poet. nice work
sir, I have heard Haikus though small leave a tremendous impact, so does yours.I too want to learn to express my thoughts in haikus. So sir kindly keep writing more haikus so that i can reflect.
Love, pure. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Pensive thoughts well expressed through this haiku!