A young tender
branch
is easily bent
into submission.
As time goes
by
maturity begins
to set in
the branch
grows stronger.
With each passing
day
she becomes able to
carry the leaves
attached
Until one day
raising her arms
high into the sky
a mature branch
emerges
refusing to bend
anymore.
An oblique write about life so elegantly written. Happy writing
Life's journey from childhood to adulthood is always difficult, but we do blossom in the end.
truely inspirational and magical poem.The way short words are written, i am bowing my heads before you.may i too write like you!
Wow, you truly write from inspirational beginnings, seems like you know where you are going.
wonderful poetry, you know how to write poetry with excellent metaphor, this is one of my favorites...10
The branch will also be able to carry the weight of the fruits. Beautiful poem. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good comparison. Clear message. Finely penned. Enjoyed.