Brand New Start Poem by Lidia Schaffer

Brand New Start



On the days that I feel hopeless On the days that I feel weak the only one true answer is Jesus that I seek. Jesus is my refuge, Jesus is my strength in the fiercest storm and my life is so much sadder when our relationship is torn. I love Jesus I love him more and more and I will be with him forever when he opens Heavens door. The day will simply come when Jesus will be back and the time will have to come when our life should be on track. Jesus love is strong it stays with us by heart, and thru the love of Jesus were offered a brand new start! !

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem I wrote to tell just how amazing our God really is and the wonderful and miraculous he things he does!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rick Elpers 07 November 2012

Lidia, very nice! ! ! It's so refreshing to read your commitment to The Lord. So often he is left out even from believers. I like your poetic quality in this confession of faith. May I suggest that you phrase it as poetry as is usually written; as prose or in stanzas to bring out that poetic nuance that we as readers enjoy. The structure will come to you as you write. Thank you so much for your kind words. It was really nice to recieve such a note today, as I was low in spirit this morning. God Bless You Lidia.

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Lidia Schaffer

Lidia Schaffer

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