Abdul Karim


Breathe A Star, - Poem by Abdul Karim

Breathe a Star,
Breathe a Star,
Star Shine on and on,
In this Perilious Time,
Regime and Life is not Waiting,
Timing is an Attitude of no Conjecture's,
I can Imagine,
World that can Breathe Again,
This Regime is Building a Soul that is all Great,
Life is not Unfair,
In the Beauty of that Great Star.


Comments about Breathe A Star, by Abdul Karim

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (5/16/2009 11:24:00 AM)

    like saadat
    I will say the same
    very expressive and elegant
    cheers (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,177 Points Saadat Tahir (5/3/2009 8:45:00 AM)

    very nice an exprssive
    im a bit nonplussed about the regime..but then that is it...it ha sto be figured out
    nice lines
    cheers (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 3, 2009



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