Brenda Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Brenda

Rating: 4.9


Eyes with silver, my swan-gracious darling, Brenda.
Decked in beauty dramatic, like a tree slender.
It thrills me, your voice gilded with summer tender.
Unto your heart I sight with sun-bright agenda.

An elegant lady, as a colourful flower,
Striking to boost my life by every streaming hour.
Ever stunned am I, deep by your beauty’s power,
Whole it drives me with awesome blistering shower.

Times candy-creamed with you unveils in me, desire.
Desire great in me blazes fiercely in wild fire.
That inferno locomotions me feel it inspire,
As I take in its flames to hold and admire.

Your heart buoys up my soul much riotously lighter.
Universal is love that lightens me brighter,
That transforms me to a lover from a fighter.
That love as the rainbow we share, expands tighter.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 23 September 2009

Words have an elevating ring to them.

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Marieta Maglas 24 September 2009

Excellent lyric poem, wonderful rhymes........10

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Rehana Nazli 24 September 2009

An elegant lady, as a colourful flower, Joyful to boost my life by every streaming hour. Ever stunned am I, deep by your beauty’s power, Whole it drives me with awesome blistering shower. Very deep and devoted love for Brenda! Beautiful praise in reflecting her graceful beauty and its influence on you.

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Rehana Nazli 24 September 2009

10/10 for this beutifully penned song of praise.

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Meggie Gultiano 25 September 2009

A nice lovely piece to a beautiful lady.

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 04 October 2009

The power of love and the meaning of it beautifully expressed.

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This is a wonderful tribute for Brenda, who appears to be such a beautiful lady in every way. Your descriptions are awesome......10 love Karin

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 29 September 2009

My My My. a beautiful broach for a very special lady to place near her hear. well written praise poem...I love it! 10++++

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Bob Blackwell 28 September 2009

A beautiful tribute to a lovely lady. Bob

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Rahul Sharma 27 September 2009

who is she...........I want to meet her..................beautiful lady and beautiful poem

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