Brickbats In Return Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Brickbats In Return

Rating: 3.5


I love nature
See the lovely future
That cool breeze
Makes me to wonder and freezes

Those lovely garden flowers
When come up with rainy shower
And blossom with seasonal change!
Appeal all human beings with any age

I love people with smile
Love itself more and defines
It is more or so with females
Men generally lack and fail

Why lord has made them rich?
Why have they different potential in each?
I find them perfect from all angles
Always ready to standby in struggle

As mother there is no parallel
As sister they always excel
How can I evaluate her contribution as partner?
No way is left except to admire

I look for smiling faces
What east or west, they are found with all races
I read those lines and ask for friends
They rally appreciate and extend

I get sometimes brickbats
Harsh words too coupled with visible hate
I take their concern lightly
But follow the same trend rightly

Why not I enjoy smiling people?
Why not hear their happiness and trouble?
Why not come closer to feel human fragrance?
I pray for and avail more and more chance

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2013

I love nature See the lovely future

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2013

Sacred Warrior1 minute ago Oh so it is a real word.. wonders! okay liked it except imho the last stanza could be dropped entirely or needs reworked.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2013

Anna Laurencio7 minutes ago good read Comment +1 Discusses the nature of congeniality and it's mistranslation

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

hussain smelter nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

shalini soni I get sometimes brickbats Harsh words too coupled with visible hate I take their concern lightly But follow the same trend rightly GOOD WORDS

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

DEVKISHAN MEH.. Nice...1.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2013

Fai Sha likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2013

wonderful imagery Kristine Mannone7 minutes ago Love your imagery makes me imagine I'm there. Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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