dr. ram sharma

Rookie (30 years / meerut)

Bride - Poem by dr. ram sharma

BRIDE
Tears in the eyes,
Tide in the heart,
A plant,
To be implanted in new orchard,
Sweet dreams,
Memories hard
Plant will grow,
In a huge tree
Responsibilities many,
Personality free


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  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (12/8/2008 9:32:00 PM)

    Tears in the eyes, tide in the heart- you have captured the turmoil in a bride's mind here. that's what life is change, acceptance and moving on.10 lovely poem


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  • Rookie - 9 Points Linda Winchell (12/8/2008 1:04:00 PM)

    Yes Sir Doctor friend, Yes! This is what a Bride should feel like. Ten! ! ! ! Bravo!
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  • Rookie C T Heart (12/7/2008 11:45:00 AM)

    symbolic composition written in a compact verse. True to be a bride is such an overwhelming feeling that tears escape in our spakling eyes. A new doorway of life to enter with lots of memories to tell later on, as the story of life goes to the end...Wonderful piece. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 7, 2008



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