Bright Beyond Compare Poem by Naseeru Taneemu Annuree

Bright Beyond Compare

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Silently,
I opened my eyes
And gazed upon the stars
And wondered if they can be as bright as you my love
Can they undo your brightness my sweet-bright?
Brightness that blossoms each time you smile
No star can dare to compare itself with you
It seems, and so it seems
That yours is unique and second to none
I gazed upon the moon
A round-yellowish creature of cycling brightness
Can the moon be as bright as you face my love?
Can it be, please tell me my dear
I cannot depicts that I believe is true
Moon can't be compare with you beauty bright
Because the moon can only be seen at night
But you, always shines and glitters around the clickling clock
The star twinkles on a silvery way
But you, as bright as you are, always walks goldly bright
You are as bright as you, you know
Millions of stars always formed a shape of a generous heart
Does it means you are generous?
Yes it is TRUE
You are generous beyond compare
Even the stars called you their prides
In their millions they arrived to learn a new thing
A new brightness that exists only in you
They giggls and glitters back to the sky
Shining brightly than anything besides you my love
It is true, no star dares to step on your way
Or should I compare you with the sun?
A round-reddish creatures that breaks the dawn
Does the sun shines as brightly as a you do?
Does the rays of sunshines matches the charms in your smiles?
Does the warmth of the sun matches the warmth of your embrace?
My love, your brightness is God given and unique
Even the sun will not dare to step on your way
Your brightness tickles round the clock
I see clearly see than heard a cry,
Through days and nights still the brightest my love
More and more brightness each time the clock tickles
But the sun cannot be seen at night
But you will be seen,
My love are you still incomparable?
Let me find it out, I will tell you
You, who gave me the reason to take no lamp
I will tell you
You know honey is sweet
I know too,
But can it be as sweet as each moment we kiss?
Do you know?
The sweetness when we kissed still has no name
So how can I compare you when you are beyond compare?
Smilingly,
I closed my eyes.......


29/July/2012
06: 02am

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to MY love FATIMA SABA JIBRIL! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aminu Aliyu 08 February 2013

NICE POEM MY FRIEND, I LOVE YOUR POEMS AND CAN'T WAIT TO SEE YOU IN AMERICA

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Unwritten Soul 29 July 2012

This is a wonderful poem Naseeru, moon always a good inspiration, comparison of any bright hearts...I did inspired by the lovely full moon, wrote a poem named A light through your heart...we may discuss in different way though....but this poem really good, keep penning new idea! _Unwritten Soul

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