Jennifer Rondeau

Rookie (03/16/90 / Seoul)

Broken - Poem by Jennifer Rondeau

I am broken,
You just can't see it,
Maybe because you are blinded how happy I am pretending to be,
You broke me once,
Yet broke me twice,
Yet again three times,
and again four and five times,
Yet you don't see why I was taking you back,
It was cause I was falling in love with you,
Why did you have to go,
Why did you leave me with all this sadness, sorrow and agony
You left me with so much to say,
You had hurt me enough,
Why is that I can't get you off of my mind,
There is so many words I wanna say to you,
Yet it won't come out,
Why is that I am so alone,
I feel as if I am num,
Why can't you see that I am broken,
Broken with this heart break you had left me,
Yet I still have memories of you and I and how happy I used to be,
Why can't see that I did loved you and cared for you,
I guess it was fate that you and I don't belong with each other,
But I will always remain broken.


Comments about Broken by Jennifer Rondeau

  • Rookie Rebeca Valenzuela (2/4/2007 1:56:00 PM)

    great poem but very sad overall it was a good poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Sam Finley (3/23/2006 11:47:00 PM)

    oohhhh great you seem so sad your poems are greatly sad and great your work reminds me of pain and heart break such words heh great just nice go for your passion (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mickey Pig Knuckles (1/16/2006 12:01:00 PM)

    Oh Jennifer, I was sad by this here poem but glad I get to read your glowing works of poetry as you write from the heart which makes poetic perfection. I really appreciated the emotional content of this poem as you reached right out and pulled this reader right into you as the warmness of emotional content of your beating heart was vividly felt. Yes being broken is a part of life but let me add that even though one may be forever scared something better is out there and when your heart starts speaking listen to it carefully as your heart may never miss guide you. Thank You so much for sharing your gift of poetry and especially for giving us a little of you. Wonderful poem. Please keep your poetic pens ink flowing so your beautiful words of poetry will keep growing. Your Friend, Mickey Pig Knuckles :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 662 Points Uriah Hamilton (1/16/2006 11:52:00 AM)

    Life leaves everyone broken, the human way. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006



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