Jennifer Rondeau

Rookie - 120 Points (03/16/90 / Seoul)

Fallen Angel - Poem by Jennifer Rondeau

I have fallen from sky,
Fallen to the ground,
I am the angel of sadness,
Angel of lost hopes,
Angel of lost dreams,
I am the fallen angel,
Fear me not,
I am here for reason,
That reason is to have a second chance in life,
That life I was given for a reason,
They took my wings,
They took me apart made me human,
I was the fallen angel,
But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven.


Comments about Fallen Angel by Jennifer Rondeau

  • Brenda Jensen Brenda Jensen (9/4/2016 12:26:00 PM)


    Jennifer such a lovely message (Report) Reply

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  • Raiven Moore Raiven Moore (8/24/2016 10:44:00 AM)


    I would say good for her and may she keep on keeping on (Report) Reply

  • Ans Maria Xavier Ans Maria Xavier (8/6/2016 7:50:00 AM)


    Good piece of art. Nice work, Ma'am (Report) Reply

  • Louis A. Borgo Louis A. Borgo (8/5/2016 8:49:00 AM)


    Intriguing poem, Louis. (Report) Reply

  • Chandan Sarkar Chandan Sarkar (8/4/2016 3:50:00 AM)


    Brilliant writing
    ...u r really an àngel (Report) Reply

  • Anitah Muwanguzi Anitah Muwanguzi (7/31/2016 11:58:00 PM)


    This is great- to not allow for others to determine tour fate but to fight to forge your own way. (Report) Reply

  • Khaled Ehtesham Khaled Ehtesham (7/17/2016 3:40:00 AM)


    i dont know you are from where? but your thoughts are excellent...really its a pleasure to read your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Donna Jones Donna Jones (7/14/2016 3:32:00 AM)


    Aww I love your angel poem it's really beautiful x (Report) Reply

  • Chandan Sarkar Chandan Sarkar (6/26/2016 2:59:00 AM)


    Really unbelievable...you have indeed angelic quality. Few lines heart-touching. Never give up hope. (Report) Reply

  • Carlos Pérez Carlos Pérez (6/5/2016 3:59:00 AM)


    Wow, this poem is really good! Would you like to read one of mine? I'm sure you'd like it :) (Report) Reply

  • Wendy Tadday (6/5/2016 3:49:00 AM)


    such a beautiful poem it just touches my heart so completely because I was given a second chance the Angeles tried to. Get me but I held on and held on and I am still here... Thank God for that one..an. Way too have beautiful talent keep it up I give u a perfect 10 you should go check some of mine at Wendy k Tadday and I will do the. Same I am going to add you to my friends list k (Report) Reply

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/29/2016 12:40:00 PM)


    They took my wings,
    They took me apart made me human,
    I was the fallen angel,

    Beautiful lines predicting your poetic talent to reach your apex..
    Thanks dear poetess for such a lovely poem.
    A perfect 10 for it.
    Subhas (Report) Reply

  • Bill Cantrell Bill Cantrell (4/2/2016 6:32:00 AM)


    All along the rainbows edge,
    Angels are placing their wings to dry
    Having softened the face of the face of the killing storm,
    They leave you a clear blue sky. And may your sky be of the bluest blue for a wonderful poem as this. (Report) Reply

  • Woru Sulyman Woru Sulyman (3/30/2016 6:51:00 AM)


    and with this conviction, this angel is sure to rise again (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (3/6/2016 10:04:00 AM)

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    But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
    This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
    This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
    This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven. The desire to lead a better life and the conviction that i will be forgiven.... mistakes, faults, right path, a shining future.... thank you very much for this poem.. tony Already Reported Reply

  • Sonali Ganguly Sonali Ganguly (2/11/2016 3:32:00 AM)


    this fallen angel would surely make others realize the value of second chance. (Report) Reply

  • Thabani Khumalo Thabani Khumalo (12/26/2015 5:43:00 AM)


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    I have fallen from sky,
    Fallen to the ground,
    I am the angel of sadness,
    Angel of lost hopes,
    Angel of lost dreams,
    I am the fallen angel,
    Fear me not,
    I am here for reason,
    That reason is to have a second chance in life,
    That life I was given for a reason,
    They took my wings,
    They took me apart made me human,
    I was the fallen angel,
    But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
    This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
    This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
    This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven. (Report) Reply

    Jennifer Rondeau Jennifer Rondeau (2/5/2016 11:55:00 PM)

    why you copy my poem? ? ? ?

  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (12/24/2015 7:05:00 AM)


    Nicely written, enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • E.j. Langley E.j. Langley (12/12/2015 3:59:00 PM)


    Touching. I have felt this, only would not call myself angelic (lol) . I hope we hear more from you. It's been a while. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Manonton Dalan (12/6/2015 1:13:00 AM)


    fallen really knows to avert things...very smart people (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006



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