Jennifer Rondeau

Rookie (03/16/90 / Seoul)

Fallen Angel - Poem by Jennifer Rondeau

I have fallen from sky,
Fallen to the ground,
I am the angel of sadness,
Angel of lost hopes,
Angel of lost dreams,
I am the fallen angel,
Fear me not,
I am here for reason,
That reason is to have a second chance in life,
That life I was given for a reason,
They took my wings,
They took me apart made me human,
I was the fallen angel,
But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven.


Comments about Fallen Angel by Jennifer Rondeau

  • Rookie - 107 Points Sonali Ganguly (5/4/2015 6:26:00 AM)

    it is really great that if life gives us second chance to learn from the mistakes...... very few people actually get this second change in life......... (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,005 Points Patricia Grantham (4/11/2015 8:27:00 PM)

    A very nice write on fallen angel. It has a lot of depth and
    understanding. We all would like to get a second chance
    at life. Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,309 Points Rakhi Jayashankar (4/6/2015 9:43:00 PM)

    periferrally this poem seems simple but thus holds so much philosophical relevance (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,947 Points Rajnish Manga (3/15/2015 1:20:00 AM)

    This is an apt message to all those fallen souls who did not have a chance or courage to set them free and to rise once again. Serene and soulful. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,073 Points Paul Sebastian (2/22/2015 8:14:00 AM)

    Great message of leaving behind the past buried and to begin a new life of a new angel. Life is to recreate after the fall and not to stay fallen. Thanks so much. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,088 Points Godfrey Morris (2/21/2015 8:47:00 PM)

    Simply awesome great write (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,535 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (2/17/2015 5:15:00 PM)

    Hello Jennifer. I enjoyed your poem and wish you the best. Loyf (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,034 Points Kim Barney (1/11/2015 6:30:00 PM)

    Love the poem, but angels don't really have wings, you know. They look just like you and me. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,953 Points Abekah Emmanuel (10/26/2014 3:08:00 PM)

    Well written poem. I like your the simplicity of the message. But does that 'fallen angel' refers to the 'lucifer' mentioned in the Bible? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fallen Angel Purrs (5/25/2012 8:02:00 PM)

    Jennifer, you're brilliant! I love this poem! Brings out so many emotions for me. Even though she has fallen, she is still full of hope. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Emily Corvinus (3/13/2012 1:33:00 PM)

    i really understand you believe me and i do agree amazing really truely amazing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Wildan F Rabbani (5/16/2009 11:27:00 PM)

    Second chance to live
    It's a worth chance

    powerful poem, lovely written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sabrina Helphrey (3/29/2009 10:23:00 AM)

    This is a very good poem. I love to think about angels but when i look up poems about them, they are all the same. This is one of the best i've read and hope that others agree. you are very talented at writting poems. keep up the good work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ali Babikir (2/11/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    My comments will be corresponded to what she had written about the fallen angel.
    Jennifer Rondeau is an exccellent poem-writer.She is really have a big experience in writing poems.Her mind inspires her to write this poem in a mould of poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Natali Surjan (9/3/2008 11:50:00 AM)

    Hey your poem is one of the BEST ive read about angles
    and hope you keep writing about 'Fallen Angel's' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Marley Morgan (6/11/2008 3:04:00 PM)

    'thats SWEET' love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mehreen Tahir (5/12/2008 2:29:00 PM)

    very nicely penned...i hope the fallen angel flies away someday! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Linda Dittus (5/9/2008 2:20:00 PM)

    Great Poem! ! Nicely penned piece (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joshua Burckhard (4/4/2008 7:12:00 AM)

    omg this is a nice poem i love it
    still i hope one day you could open your wings to fly (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Judy Weatherington (3/7/2008 6:46:00 AM)

    omg i love this
    it is so cute and sad at the same time: ( (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006



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