Amy Hang

Rookie (12/3/90 / Denver)

Broken Chain

We've been so close.
We love, hug, held, and been there for eaach other.
Took little steps to stick together.
Shared information that was sadm upsetting, and funny.
We laughed, cried, an will die together.
It was unseperable.

Then one by one, each fell inlove or liked someone.
Stalked by others and blamed each other.
Words that are unbearable to even listen to.
Misunderstand from the facts stucked in their minds.
Dam guys, it wasn't suppose to ruin our relationship.
Last looks on those cherishing faces, gone....

My heart is torn apart, more than being broken-up.
Tears falling from my eyes, it's depresing.
Feeling pain from the views of this bull-shyte.
It's nothing, but bull-shyte.
It hurts me terribly like thousand bullets shot at me.
Our friendship wasn't suppose to expire. Especially not now.

The thoughts of those who are lost or against one another,
Has an incorrect details and needs to recheck their information.
Loosing one another wasn't out idea of friends forever.
What was our best friends necklace suppose to mean now?
We were SUPPOSE to be UNBREAKABLE! ! !
Now, it's a broken chain.

-Amy Hang
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April 20,2009

Submitted: Monday, April 20, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, June 02, 2009
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