Randy Resh

Rookie - 182 Points (April,1967 / Toronto, Canada)

Broken Constellation Poem by Randy Resh


Star fallin'
Cast too fast
Far too sudden
Sullen

Open hand
Blows birthday candles
Wavering waving
Wonderin'


Copyright Randy Resh 2008

Submitted: Friday, February 27, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, June 8, 2011
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  • Rookie Wendy Bureau (3/9/2009 11:01:00 AM)

    A fallen star... a birthday candle.. A wish remained unanswered.. Like a puzzle who's own pieces refuse to connect in completion.. this write has said much to this reader.. Nice Work Rnd..

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