Broken Constellation Poem by Randy Resh

Broken Constellation

Rating: 5.0


Star fallin'
Cast too fast
Far too sudden
Sullen

Open hand
Blows birthday candles
Wavering waving
Wonderin'


Copyright Randy Resh 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wendy Bureau 09 March 2009

A fallen star... a birthday candle.. A wish remained unanswered.. Like a puzzle who's own pieces refuse to connect in completion.. this write has said much to this reader.. Nice Work Rnd.. Wnd :)

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Randy Resh

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Toronto, Canada
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