Broken Egg Poem by Vivienne Margaret Bateman

Broken Egg

Rating: 4.3


(For Colm at three years old)

You broke an Easter egg
I had kept since a child
as you danced round the fire bare-footed.

I thought how the Chinese
would mark out in gold
the crack in a broken vessel,
taking a delight in its fragility,
in its state between existing and not...
but this egg was in a thousand pieces.

And though there was nothing fragile
about your roaring
that drowned the music
you'd been dancing to,
nor in the hot tears
teeming down your cheeks,
I would mark out with gold
your sudden pain
as you understood that beauty does not last.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 04 November 2016

Very nice poetry, intelligent and emotional with meter and a style I adore, thanks for posting

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