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Broken Hearted

Sitting by the waters edge
I now stare at a reflection
of a broken man.

A heart forever filled
with my love for you.

I cry lonesome tears
with a mind battered
and bruised by losing you.

The sounds of my grief
echoes through my heart
as I try so desperately
to step away from the past.

But the songs of nature
will always remind me
of the love I thought
would always last.

Closing my eyes
I cry inside, as my heart
silently dies.

Every day has become
so hard to bare, as I
search inside
for a reason to smile.

Only yesterday, it feels
that I lost you.
As this pain still feels
the same.

Crying into my broken reflection
I hear my heart call out your name.





© Jon.London 2009

Submitted: Wednesday, July 22, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, July 22, 2009


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  • Deborah Cromer (7/25/2009 12:47:00 AM)

    Dang! Your poor heart silently dying. You did some sad, painful writing. Dude! Do you know how clearly you captured pain and hurt? I want to say very nice, but it's full of pain and how nice is that? I'll just say very well written. You've organized this in a very relatable way. Deborah Cromer

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  • Ency Bearis (7/23/2009 8:44:00 AM)

    well described emotion.....10

  • Lynda Robson (7/23/2009 8:41:00 AM)

    You have described th epain of losing someone so well here Jon,
    Crying in my cuppa,
    10
    Lynda xx

  • Broken Heart (7/23/2009 1:41:00 AM)

    nycc poem! !
    gr8! ! ..

  • Lady Grace (7/22/2009 3:28:00 PM)

    words when emotionally written makes up a good poem, ..when a poem comes from heart and brain, absolutely the result is a perfect poem like this poem of urs my dear jon..this is nicely done..i go with carl harris, i will use the word 'tremendously written'...

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (7/22/2009 1:29:00 PM)

    A truly broken hearted poem, Jon. A deep seeded melancholy has been
    out poured.........10/10.

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (7/22/2009 1:18:00 PM)

    very touchy reflection my friend Jon! I would say its an amazing song of heart!
    10+

  • Carol Gall (7/22/2009 12:55:00 PM)

    extremely beautifully written jon 10

  • Carl Harris (7/22/2009 12:44:00 PM)

    Boy, I know this feeling all to well, Jon, and have been there myself more times than I care to mention. This melancholy poem is tremendously well written and expressed. It is a very moving write and one which nearly all of us can relate to very well, having had similar experiences in life and love ourselves. Carl.

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