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As I whisper your name the blend of colours and tone bring your your smile back home.
I sit in the breeze as this blessed whisper returns to me.
The feel of gentle rain showers me with your love, as it falls like tears from my face.
I breathe the loving air that reminds me of your heavenly scent as I sit here in our once favourite place.
The willow, still stands with its emerald loving hands, that we'd lie beneath making love which was always so unplanned.
I run my lonely fingers over the flattened blades As I picture you there in the willow shade.
I remember the way you would smile looking into my eyes as we shared our love for one another.
Raising my hand I wipe away the tear of these memories as I now sit lonely under our tree.
I look to the dream filled skies, as a single bird flies to-ward the heavens as I cry.
© Jon.London 2009
London Love Poems
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Wednesday, July 22, 2009 |
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Wednesday, July 22, 2009 |
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Deborah Cromer (7/25/2009 12:09:00 AM)
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Very sensitive and written with an understanding of what was and what is. Touching poem. DC
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nomad omnia (7/24/2009 3:55:00 AM)
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Beautiful Jon. It's like a celebration of what has been, not a lament for what is lost. N
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Carol Gall (7/22/2009 12:57:00 PM)
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it feels like one is there watching from shadows 10
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Carl Harris (7/22/2009 12:49:00 PM)
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This is another melancholy poem of a lost love, Jon, and it is also very well written and expressed, telling it's poignant tale exceptionally well from beginning to end.
Carl.
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Catrina Heart (7/22/2009 11:47:00 AM)
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memories of love that was...poignant composition...under the willow tree, the shared moments left print in your heart...10+++
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