its breaking as we speak
the promise you failed to keep
its growing old and week, but you promised.
you swore to keep your word
a lie remains unheard
your memory is blurred, but you promised
love is what you said
and hate is what you dread
my mind is going dead, cause you promised
inside my secrets dwell
love pushed me and i fell
and now its just oh well, but you promised
you said you'd keep me warm
and hold me through the night.
in your heart i was alright, broken promise.
great poem.. put awayt h esad feeling eh.. smile!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
my mind is going dead, cause you promised inside my secrets dwell love pushed me and i fell sweet lines... and the poem is heartfelt one.. romantic and soul touchy even.. liked it very much and felt like you made of love for love.. wonderful way of writing..thanks for comments and respect..same from my side and love your poetry..and enjoying much...10/10