Broken Promises Poem by Daniel Sims

Broken Promises



Promises are mere hollow words,
Meaningless like me to the birds,
But they represent us, or what we were,
This hollow-like feeling seems to recur.

The vow of trusts between two friends,
Turns to hate, even disgust, and then it ends,
The truth of it all is hard to believe,
But the hate of your soul, is easy to achieve.

For the girl I loved, and which you knew,
You stole from me, and now she loves you,
So I plot my revenge, for the cold-hearted fiend,
Who knew R could've changed a word, or intervened.

Good friends help and lie for one another,
Unless, of course, it concerns one's other,
Because then, it seems, your so-called friend,
Brings you to your buckling knees, the end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amber Marie 19 September 2011

whoa. I can see anger within this one. I can tell it has a meaningful purpose to express how one feels about ones friend. Its an easy one to figure out, but all in all you are really talented at poems that in which express deep strong emotion. :)

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