Brothers Poem by Joshua cole

Brothers

Rating: 3.0


shatter the thoughtless mind
it looks it looks
but it is blind

create fine sir, decide for me
so that i may march two, by two, by two,
my knees will never rise,
hand placated in it sleepy somber

I bear no witness, only memories
half pence
one man decides for another,
or I would be there with you brother

your war god says no
so i go, i go.
as i look back on death i ask;
why not me? why not my last breath?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 16 August 2008

This one is too vague to be understood. So, I gave it a 6. I suppose it has a good message but I don't know what it is. GW62

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