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Bubbles

Take water
Add soap
And
And.. now you have something amazing
Bubbles
They are able to float around
Roam he world
And be free
NO one to tell them
What to do
Who to be
They are free
All the freedom
In the world
To be...
To be...free
Until...
POP
All my dreams
Have gone away
There go all my
Hopes and dreams
Down the drain
POP!

Submitted: Monday, July 16, 2012
Edited: Saturday, September 01, 2012

Poet's Notes about The Poem

A new take on bubble....kinda

Comments about this poem (Bubbles by Erin Dyas )

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  • Adeline Foster (8/4/2012 1:05:00 PM)

    I like it but I don't think you wanted an 'r' in 'Drown' last line. Read mine- Who Am I -
    Adeline

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