If I could remember
what I am looking for
I would stop
to take a rest.
Yes, this is good. If is such a powerful word.
If I could remember what I am looking for I would stop to take a rest. a fantastic bullet..small but have more effects and a long story is hidden inside..I like the way you write very perfectly.. meaningful, and interesting idea is there inside..symbolic and heartfelt cognitive approach..well done 10/10
woooooooooooow, i dont know what to sy, i wish i could rest too great dear poet
interesting poem and very inquisitive..the poem is enticing..marvelous poem though..outstanding work!
Great piece, I also have written one called Bullet,10 regards Tom
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
maybe you're unaware, that you may have placed it in your poem. Good read.