Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 264 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Bullet's Effects - Poem by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

i think we all can estimate the bullet's effects,
sea of blood and the the people who collect,

people who collect the lives of poor,
people who are fighting to achieve doer

bullet's side effect is merge death
it will kill your warm cheering breath

as our black moon is coming up,
as the riches are collecting golden cups,

they don't care about the world,
they make bullets, like the spring of words

there is nothing but a trade,
that those people have made,

THEY JUST WORRY ABOUT MONEY.......


Poet's Notes about The Poem

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inspired by dear Dave Walker, after reading his beautiful recent work.
Thanks.

Comments about Bullet's Effects by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

  • Rookie - 27 Points Daniel Warner (12/13/2013 12:13:00 PM)

    Wonderful..... I have a poem similar, and Dave is right. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,791 Points Dave Walker (12/11/2013 4:44:00 PM)

    A fantastic poem, money really is the root of all evil.
    Really happy that my poem inspired you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 11, 2013



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