Demarcus Walker

Rookie (7/29/92 / Texas)

Burning Heart - Poem by Demarcus Walker

this feelin
is like a pain
like my heart had burst in to flames

my heart is burning with love
for this girl from the heavens above
but i dont know did i fell in love

that girl made heat
when she walk past me
with nice & slow feet

listen to me
my heart still got the heat

but my love is from my burninig heart
that where it had all started

Comments about Burning Heart by Demarcus Walker

  • Rookie Cassie Heinz (6/26/2009 9:45:00 PM)

    beautiful poem..... from the heart :) could u read my poems and comment, there arent many yet...: / (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (6/15/2009 8:21:00 PM)

    The burning desire that sparks the burning heart to a standstill.You're in the ring of fire now Demarcus. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Guess who's back Angel Wade (6/10/2009 9:04:00 AM)


  • Rookie Cristy Upshaw (6/9/2009 8:46:00 PM)

    raw emotions fill the page from a heart burning for love. absolutely wonderful, hun. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jason Sherrill (6/9/2009 12:16:00 PM)

    Very good, sounds straight from the heart, need to work on rhyming though, using the same word over and over gets repiticious and leaves the average reader feeling bored, but overall, very good (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 9, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 9, 2009

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