Katie Huntress

Rookie (march 6,1990)

Burning - Poem by Katie Huntress

Candle burning in the dark,
Some ones watching from the dark,
I slash my wrist and
Hope to die,
I sit in a corner and
Cry till I can’t cry,
Will some one come help me?
Candle burning in the dark,
Some ones watching from the dark.

Comments about Burning by Katie Huntress

  • Rookie Alex Y. (11/21/2005 11:07:00 AM)

    Wow, Katie. This poem is deep. Its a really short and sweet poem. You can really touch readers with this poem. I know I was touched. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich1 (11/10/2005 6:49:00 AM)

    I would change at least one of the 'dark' to Park ? ? ? What do you think?
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  • Rookie Ivy Christou (11/4/2005 11:31:00 AM)

    someone is always watching from the dark.. it's either ourself screaming for help or that special one that waits for the right tme before he comes for the rescue..
    HBH (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mary Nagy (11/4/2005 11:28:00 AM)

    Very ominous! You are screaming for help! I sure hope the people that really need to read these poems get the chance. Sincerely, mary (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 3, 2005

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