Silence glow within the dark
As humility stumble with kindness
Sorrow is a malignant curse
That begins confusion and sadness
Devastated dreams and luck
Thoughts deceived by words
Intensely dropped broken hope
Pierced by countless swords
Destiny proclaims a mystery
A day so close and deep
Sun’s virtues were untold
To my ears are saved to creep
Blood rustle down my veins
Huge remorse to defeat and break
Hatred and guilt all follows
With this deep wound that you make
Relieve me now my dearest
In this tormented vanity
Give me touch of affection
And “Bury Me To Eternity”
at such a small age u write so brilliantly.... i shall be waiting for more of ur poems.. :) good work.
Very good, hon. But I noticed only two poems? Write on! This was well done. I would like to see more. -Wes
excellent very dark and worrying but so well penned. Thankyou for the comment on my Dreams od Singapore, very astute observation, hidden meanings x
YOur lines are vigorous and power-packed, Pink Butterfly Blood rustle down my veins Huge remorse to defeat and break Hatred and guilt all follows With this deep wound that you make
This poem was shared in 2009. But its message is still relevant. Kindness and compassion to fellow beings make life worth living.
Bury me to eternity...it sound like fallen angel crying...You created beautiful poem, even though u decorate it with pain and put many accessories of darkness but it still make this poem as a drawing of white heart...this is good, keep writing but to bury you to eternity? this is too early, but treasure yourself save people from calamity..make this life more secure! Hopes never fade..happy always okay! .. that's good :) :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice work...the poetic spirit is working...enough to be qualified to the discipline to poetry. like it...keep up the good work.