But Still........... Poem by Prachi Agrawal

But Still...........

Rating: 5.0


Can I ask you for a favour
Please be here with me
I know it’s not possible
But still..........

Can you do me a favour
Hold my hand never to leave
I know you won’t
But still………..

Can I ask you for a favour
Stay by me always
I know you can’t
But still………..

Can you do me a favour
Talk to me all the time
I know it’s silly
But still……..

Can I ask you for a favour
Never ever leave me alone
I know you’ll
But still……….

Can you do me a favour
Come with me wherever I go
I know I’m being stupid
But still……….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 20 January 2012

A really great poem, like it. A good write.

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Kumud Ranjan 20 January 2012

feelings are good.. ideas are good, so is the expectation though verbosity is there (as you have repeated two lines regularly in all stanzas) nice beginning...

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