But Who's Listening? Poem by papillon alamy

But Who's Listening?

Rating: 4.5


war in North war in Est
war in South war in West
prove who's the best
and beat the weakest

Spoil immorally the patriots
Kill them like rots
demating people and no matter if they die
massacring them such as a fly
demolishing with gun
drag them through the mud

we share the same world
One world, say one word
help each other, we should
being in aid worker, if could
then, we'll beat the ennemy if we would

messing up lives insolently
raping women wildly
strangling upright citizens and no pity

enough wars enough deads
hug this silly little child who fears
stop killing and sowing deads

give up attacking and being strictness
be subtle and give up uncouthness
no more tears no more torn dresses
this is our purpose and our supposed promesses

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cool Soubai 01 August 2008

The world needs peace and love.Keep writing papillon

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Greenwolfe 1962 20 July 2008

This is a sincere and fine writing in a foreign language to the writer. I praise the work. GW62

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Duncan Wyllie 16 July 2008

Enough of wars! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! You are so right, in peace the answer lives Lovew duncan X

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