Feel like a butterfly; mostly
half finished
still clinging to the
umbilical cord of the Palette
replaced
before drying
small but so cute nice write ++10 anju (do read and comment on mine)
This kind of small poems with some flash it them appeal to me most....very good.10
unth(superb) write, in few words everything is described....i loved it thanks 10++++ for this remarkable write rgds asif
Wow, I am floating on a palettes vibrant colors where a butterfly left behind, I touch it once and I become whole. Superb!
A metamorphosis, which is not complete with the color effect in aesthetics of poetry. Here is a wonderful picture in the lyrics.10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ocassional doubt, and the mortal ellement of human insecurity....can result in making us better & stronger, in whatever our deficiencies be....There are a many strings attached to Life. Sometimes all we can do is hold-on tight to faith in God & ourselves...in that order.Great Penning, Rehan! -fjr-