Hello Caitlyn
You're only two
You barely know me
But I really love you
I never had someone
To care about before
Then you came along
And melted my heart
If you read this poem
I hope you don't laugh
And sorry it doesn't rhyme
It wasn't supposed to
It's actually really a bad poem
But this is how i express myself
You are one of the few things in my life
That give me
Hope
Joy
Love
Hapiness
You keep smiling little one
Keep laughing and playing and having fun
You don't know how long you'll be happy
So treasure every moment you are
I'll be here for you as an aunty
Or a sister
Or a friend
Just let me know
Okay Caitlyn
This poem is for you
Hope you like it
Although it sucks
I wanna let you know
You are the one
Who taught me how to
Love again
this one is really good i understand i work with kids and they are amazing...it makes u feel so warm inside because they love u just as u are good job
why do you say your poems aren't good? ? ? it's fantastic and had an idea...and you could express it..good one! !
why do you say your poems aren't good? ? ? it's fantastic and had an idea...and you could express it..good one! !
This poem is not bad. I liked it very much, it speaks the truth and is well put together and it does not have to rhyme. Good job.......
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The point of a poem isnt about rhyme and rythem, its about an expession of emotion, getting an idea across, making an impact, healing a heart ect. and those things you do sooo well. Don't be down on yourself. There are already enough people in the world who work at criticizing the arts, don't be one of them. :) I understand what you are talking about when you speak of this precious little girl. They are so young and innocent in this cruel world, breath in the fresh air they exert anytime you get a chance. Don't know you but love you, Sabrina Rice