Calender Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

Calender

Rating: 4.8


</>You made your own calender
Filled with the evil days
By blood, fire, and black smoke
That`s are no long further

We prayed with pure mind
And buried our worries
With blood and tear
Before Strong God

we are able to scratch
Your sin created dates
From our holy calender
For the years and Era`s.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 11 January 2009

Good strong write Vinu...thank you

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Sathyanarayana M V S 19 January 2009

Can we erase sins & their effects and results? ! I dont think so.

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Rita Shay 22 January 2009

The second line made me say 'woah.' It defintly catches the readers attention. Your passion spills out into your words. good job

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 August 2011

I am overwhelmed with this poem here.Well done and beautifully written

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 10 June 2010

[PPP] Poignant Profound Poem we live by choice …you mean to say…Karma… 10//10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Surya . 04 June 2009

vvery interesting even mysterious poem.love it. posted 10 love®ards surya

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Sandra Fowler 22 March 2009

Very profound. Each day is another blank page. What we write upon it is our choice. From the spiritual standpoint.10 for a thought provoking read. Kind regards, Sandra

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Mamta Agarwal 05 February 2009

it depends on us what we fill our days with. very inn ovative poem Vinoduk 10 Mamta

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