God smiles with pleasant face
I raised my agonies
Why the earth filled with pain
When it will finish
God smiles with pleasant face
I untied my worries
Why the fight of fire
When it will conclude
God smiles again and again
And tell without spell
You are the responsible
And stay beyond the sky
the good and bad is caused by our actions, if only most of us could learn from others and our own mistakes/ misfortune each day would be a little brighter, a lovely piece great job
Using God's smiles to weave analogical metaphors is a great effort. Please comment on my works.
The importance of the poem is the reason shown in the conclusion that is you are the responsible. well done.
I am not religious but I loved this, especially the last two lines you are the responsible/and stay beyond the sky. nice poem! ~mye3
Excellent poem with a beautiful message..You are responsible and stay beyond the sky. Loved reading it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
we are the reason of our own sadness/ a good poem! ! !