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Tsira Goge (2/21/2009 11:59:00 PM)
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Jim, very beautiful and warm surprise...10...
Tsira
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Carl Harris (2/9/2009 9:30:00 PM)
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Well, this is an excellent and insightful poem into that humungous birth of eight infants at one time out in California, Jim. It is also written perfectly in the new Ameri-ku form. With no husband, no home, no job, we all wonder what that woman was thinking! Still, the babies all appear healthy so maybe God will bless them all. Fourteen children in one house is going to be quite an experience! Carl.
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C.R. Clark (2/9/2009 3:18:00 PM)
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A very fine poem indeed, Jim. These parents are truly blessed and likely very tired. I can imagine them saying:
Young'uns, Young'uns everywhere
No time to even fret
Young'uns, Young'uns everywhere
So many diapers wet.
A thoughtful write my friend....10...
Richard
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John Mccudden (2/9/2009 3:14:00 PM)
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jim short and on the ball nice make you think how could you get eight little lifes in one space lol we know nothing
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Sandra Fowler (2/5/2009 8:56:00 PM)
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A charming picture full of smiles. May these small human beings be blessed.
Lovely write.
Warm regards,
Sandra
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Lisa Deer (1/31/2009 4:23:00 PM)
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Indeed..poor busy woman! ! .
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Fiona Davidson (1/31/2009 10:07:00 AM)
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Briliant news of the birth and this is a brilliant poem...is this an ameri-ku again: 0)) ...10+++....Fi
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