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6.6
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Why is it
that I can cry
seeing a tv program same as I.
Family situations, I can relate,
Only they are actors, I am real.
Hidden from others,
should I think I am hidding
from the feelings of the world.
The world is chaotic, I'm just one
judging the show, it must be real.
I'm tipsy, so I'll spot you that,
but reality comes from the script, I feel.
Jim Norausky
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Sunday, December 07, 2008 |
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Saturday, January 31, 2009 |
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Comments about this poem (Emotion
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Jim Norausky
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Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (6/14/2009 5:02:00 AM)
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I think the best scripts are written by writers who have experienced so much, or writers who band together to pool ideas. That's why we can cry and be pulled into the reality of it all. Emotion is a great name for the poem and your writing is heartfelt and extremely real. 10 Karin Anderson
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Patti Masterman (3/21/2009 6:03:00 PM)
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I think we are all inclined to view others as heroic and ourselves as prosaic.
If only we could see ourselves on tv through their eyes just once. Nice theme
and well developed.
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Lisa Deer (2/8/2009 3:22:00 PM)
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Hmmm...strong silent type eh? ...know this Jim..there is beauty in that too.
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Marie Shine (2/6/2009 1:32:00 PM)
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Lovely poem, full of feeling and beautifully expressed Jim - A 10
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Rita Shay (1/28/2009 6:26:00 PM)
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Wow excellent job. I can completely relate to this poem! Great read =)
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Brenda Arroyo (1/13/2009 9:45:00 PM)
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I loved this.
The last line blew me away.
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Kevin Wells (1/10/2009 5:37:00 AM)
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Yep. I can identify with this one. I am a very emotional person but I have a problem with letting people see that side of me - almost as if it makes me less of a man!
I guess it is the way our respective generations brought us up!
It is that locked-up emotion that manifests in our writing. I can relate with this so easily. I must watch the same tv programmes.
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Annie Girl (12/21/2008 5:07:00 PM)
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awsome work nice way of putting each word into meaning.
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