Can I, Yes I Can Poem by Josephine Dunn

Can I, Yes I Can

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Can I, Yes I Can

Can I look at a man
And see the boy within,
Can I look at a boy and
Love the man
He will become,
Yes I can,
Yes I can.

Can I look past
The lines of worry,
See all the times
That made him sorry
To walk away,
Yes I can,
Yes I can.

Can I find the truth
In this mis-spent youth
Un-weave the threads,
Release the dread
That lies beneath,
Yes I can,
Yes I can.

Can I see a future
For this boy-man-child
Rekindle his hope
Without taming what's wild,
And give him life,
Yes I can,
Yes I can.

Friday, September 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: boy,hope,love,man
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2017

Seeing lines of worries all the time provokes thought. For seeing future we all become crazy. Love needs hope and hope brings love. Amazing poem is shared.10

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Josephine Dunn 23 October 2017

Thanks; -D

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 September 2017

Can I look past The lines of worry, See all the times That made him sorry Thanks dear Josephine for sharing such a poem of high taste, rich in poetic skills. 10++++ for it.

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Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken 22 September 2017

Beautiful poem Josephine Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Josephine Dunn 23 October 2017

Thanks: -D

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D Priyanka Singh 22 September 2017

Can I find the truth In this mis-spent youth Un-weave the threads, Release the dread That lies beneath, Yes I can, Yes I can. A very beautiful poem and a trend setter. 10++++

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Josephine Dunn 23 October 2017

Thank you: -D

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