Treasure Island

hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

can u be same


I said loudly "yes, yes and yes "
Might not be heard by her with trace..
I was all along whispering too
My god I was in love and that was true

I never wanted it to happen
To go little far off even
That is destiny we have hoped
If all goes well and show is not flopped

Heart must remain in jovial mood
As love and affection is the only food
We can cherish the memory and enjoy
What is today in our hand with joy

Where is need to confess?
When it is reflected on face
Face shines with little of your appearance
I take it one in million chances

There is no going back now
I have allowed enough water to flow
So there prevails no dearth of love
Almost certain and secured to believe

It might have been slow in steps
But never uncertain with perhaps
It was you all over in mind
Can you be same of that kind?

Submitted: Saturday, March 16, 2013

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2013 6:38:00 AM)

    Ram Nath likes this.

    Ram Nath Atiuttam..............Wahhhhhhhhhhh..........//Where is need to confess?
    When it is reflected on face
    Face shines with little of your appearance
    I take it one in million chances
    10 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/16/2013 1:14:00 AM)

    Interesting Analysis


    Michael De La Fuente1 hour ago
    As Sanyati mentioned below, it was a bit off rhyme yet portrayed the suspenseful thought clearly.

    Keep writing fellow poet; the more profound it will be once you get real deep.
    Comment +1
    lovable


    Bhupathi Prabhakara Rao1 hour ago
    lovely
    Comment +1
    Okay

    Sanyati Higgins2 hours ago
    The repetitiveness and off-rhymes left me a bit confused, but the basic meaning of the poem got through. (Report) Reply

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