I said loudly "yes, yes and yes "
Might not be heard by her with trace..
I was all along whispering too
My god I was in love and that was true
I never wanted it to happen
To go little far off even
That is destiny we have hoped
If all goes well and show is not flopped
Heart must remain in jovial mood
As love and affection is the only food
We can cherish the memory and enjoy
What is today in our hand with joy
Where is need to confess?
When it is reflected on face
Face shines with little of your appearance
I take it one in million chances
There is no going back now
I have allowed enough water to flow
So there prevails no dearth of love
Almost certain and secured to believe
It might have been slow in steps
But never uncertain with perhaps
It was you all over in mind
Can you be same of that kind?
Interesting Analysis Michael De La Fuente1 hour ago As Sanyati mentioned below, it was a bit off rhyme yet portrayed the suspenseful thought clearly. Keep writing fellow poet; the more profound it will be once you get real deep. Comment +1 lovable Bhupathi Prabhakara Rao1 hour ago lovely Comment +1 Okay Sanyati Higgins2 hours ago The repetitiveness and off-rhymes left me a bit confused, but the basic meaning of the poem got through.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ram Nath likes this. Ram Nath Atiuttam..............Wahhhhhhhhhhh..........//Where is need to confess? When it is reflected on face Face shines with little of your appearance I take it one in million chances 10 minutes ago · Unlike · 1