Can U See Poem by Lechelle Jones (01.24.91,D.C)

Can U See



Can u see the pain that cuts her deep
Can u feel her struggles that cause misery

If you cared you'd pay attention
But you dont that's why u refuse to listen

Are you that selfish that all that matters is u
Are u that careless that u deny the truth

That's ur child lying hurt
She wants u near but all u do is treat her like dirt

U walk pass as if she dosent exsist
U ignore her screams as if she's worthless
Do u have no heart, are u emotionless? ?

Its all your fault she can't stand on her own its all your fault she can't bare to be alone.
You've crippled her and yet you still dont care.

Your so wraped up in your own u dont even notice she's crying alone.
You dont even notice she wishes to be dead
Nor do u notice she has bruises on her head

All by her boyfreind that beats her
If u were any real father you'd care how he treats her.

The tears are flowing now she stands in your face u can't even see she's using this man so the love u dnt show can be replaced.

Its the only reason why she allows the things that go on between them two.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deborah Cromer 16 June 2009

Writing poetry comes with a price. We get our material and information from our feelings. Some of the experiences we have, we use bits and pieces to make a whole. You seem to have a pretty good idea on how to write to get people to listen. Deborah Cromer

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Lady Grace 14 June 2009

yes, there are things you can't see but i can..there are also many things i could see but you can't..so always think twice..grace

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Kayla Daley 13 June 2009

you might want to go back and correct spelling This poem is sad but i like it

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Rae Sinclair 13 June 2009

wow, i really love this poem. it's so insightful and can tell an actual story.

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