Come Back Poem by Lechelle Jones (01.24.91,D.C)

Come Back

Rating: 5.0


Tears fallen on my pillow
Pain drilling thru my head
Its all the thoughts of u never coming back that has me crying in my bed
Tell me why u left me what did I do to to make u leave
Im sorry for everything
baby, just come back to me please
Remeber those late nights all the things we use to do all those times you'd come over just to say I love you
I want it all back right here and right now
I want my husband, my soulmate and the future father of my child
Your the best thing to happen to me
What possibly could I do with out u
Life will never be the same unless I got u to call my boo.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Antonio Liao 03 June 2009

a realistic poetic melo of our time....the beauty inside lies the emotion that lives in every readers feeling....a master piece of what meant to be true...of you...a 10

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 28 December 2009

Don't know what to say... Should i praise your words? but how can i praise your pain..?

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 28 December 2009

Don't know what to say... Should i praise your words? but how can i praise your pain..?

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Aww it seems he means alot to you...hope everything works out for the best_good job! ! ! DLG

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Slade Oriley 04 June 2009

This is well written. You have alot of emotion involved and I can tell this is heart felt. You do a great job. :) 10

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Toni Bellanger 03 June 2009

beautifully written and flowed well

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