Candlesticks Poem by Felicia Manning

Candlesticks



We are all just,
Drip,
Drip,
Dripping away,
As time passes,
We melt away.

Like candlesticks,
With their lit wicks,
We are warm,
Illuminated,
We all melt,
Both the ordinary and sophisticated.

While fire gives the candle purpose,
It's also the cause of its demise,
You can see this happen,
Right before your eyes.

Burning all day,
Drip,
Drip,
Dripping away.

Once a nice candle,
Now just a puddle of wax,
No need to worry,
It will be remolded,
Relax.

Friday, April 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 28 July 2017

i'm now taking this to place in my/our August 2017 showcase. Thanks. the poem again impressed me greatly. bri :)

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 April 2015

Great ethereal analogy that reads charmingly delicate as life's ephemeral status. But we will have an afterlife so we could work for that. Nice to read u again. Take care.

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Tango 17 April 2015

This is an excellent poem, and so true. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. Tango.

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Kelly Kurt 17 April 2015

A fun and well written poem, Felicia. Thanks

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