We found each other, hungry,
thirsty, and singed by love.
I'm charred by love again, then
you left this rapacious lioness
I commence to rage,
strangling on anger,
losing my way.
now I lay a weaken prey.
Rush upon me, you
hungry lion!
Ohhh gosh.. you have used great imagery indeed.. I mean this is very different.. I mean I have been reading lots of different poems lately.. First the title interested me.. poem good, very nice to read.. I like your expressions//... very creative.and imaginative.. love shan
A passionate write. Loved the story line of the poem! So enjoyed; D
u are a great writer and i love how u keep em simple and short...my writes are too long for some people...
Exotic [Strikingly strange or unusual] exuberance love…downed by absence… so to come closer…wants to be prey even…. Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10
Out of love and alone, I can’t find a way. I’m a weaken prey. So rush upon me, you hungry lion! ....speaks helpless state of mind ondesertionand it is unbearable pain.....lovley theme....10 read mine pain....you go alone
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Must have been a torrid and passionate love. nice write