Almedia Knight Oliver

Evening's Solitude

In evening's solitude sipping a glass of wine, or
maybe two, and listening to Roberta's love songs
and being spirited away dizzily to dream land

Recalling your eyes that once never wearied of mine
tonight the weight of uncertainty keep my lids wide
envisioning a love and passion waning like the moon

Remembering still...
The baby breathing quietly
Passion wide awake…these are
Times to keep awake
Seeing stars in the distance sky
Childhood screams and dreams are
behind, like our last passionate kiss

My dear we're just tired
So lets just sleep
eternity lies far ahead
leaving love behind

Submitted: Saturday, August 08, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Topic of this poem: loneliness

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Loneliness, but not alone

Comments about this poem (Evening's Solitude by Almedia Knight Oliver )

  • Rookie - 13 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (8/29/2010 9:50:00 AM)

    the third stanza is the best... i can see it! wow, nice write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 62 Points Kesav Easwaran (8/7/2010 12:14:00 PM)

    beautiful autumn eternal; yes, for those who could relish the values within...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 86 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (6/28/2010 8:47:00 AM)

    Hon’ble Poet Ma’am taken patent on poeming on final exit- separation - de - partment - dislodgement - cleavage…still the poetic melancholy calorie makes readers calorie oblivious [lolol]…will lead to gain of fatty knowledge and flabby joy by the readers…… thanks sharing…
    Ms. Nivedita
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,935 Points Ken E Hall (2/10/2010 4:26:00 AM)

    Ah sweet memories of young love dreaming under closed eyelids...solitude the time it all comes the poem
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (8/21/2009 8:33:00 AM)

    So beautiful and reflective poetry Almedia and yet it leads into the future where dreams are waiting to be fulfilled. The love songs evoke a feeling of tenderness and deep love, even though passionate kisses, can become more companionable. Eloquent and moving writing. 10 love Karin (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Paige S (8/18/2009 11:55:00 AM)

    I enjoyed the controlled, quiet passion of this piece. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (8/17/2009 12:45:00 PM)

    what a beautiful, passionate write indeed..
    hey touched my heart.. Nice miss Knight.. you kept the poignant aspect through out....

    shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Steven S (8/17/2009 9:19:00 AM)

    Reflective... tranquil… and yet, it breaks my heart… passionate kisses ought not ever be gone until the end and the kissers are gone. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Raj Arumugam (8/14/2009 5:38:00 PM)

    lovely poem that leads one gently on to the last lines, and perahps into eternity... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Knight (8/13/2009 3:45:00 PM)

    Hi Almedia - a lovely evocative poem with just the right mixture of nostalgia and hope. Human love is transient and does wane (my wife and I are the same age as you!) but God's love is constant. When we all get to Heaven we shall all be changed we will mount up with wings like Eagles, we will run and not be weary (when did that last happen) we will walk and not faint. Keep looking up the Lord is surely there waiting for us all! God Bless - John. I'll give it 10! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (8/12/2009 7:41:00 PM)

    Lovely piece brings much to think touches the reader on so many levels my's very well written...beautiful infact 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (8/10/2009 10:11:00 PM)

    could be read at many levels../lovely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (8/9/2009 10:52:00 AM)

    in my evening's solititude..iam touched and sadly felt by your expressive poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (8/8/2009 12:02:00 PM)

    lovely poem
    reminds me of an old song
    'evening shadows makes me blue'
    surely a tenner from me
    (if time permits do read mine YOUR ALWAYS IN MY HEART) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie dr veenaa rai (8/8/2009 10:48:00 AM)

    love has different aspects to u grow old, it unfolds many a new options and puts an end to many...honest, nice, lovely... (Report) Reply

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