Cant Take It. Poem by geraldine l. loves you

Cant Take It.



you knew i liked him all along,
you're flirting with him, after i told u that i liked him so much
but now you got it all wrong.
he was my first real crush.

you just cant seem to not ruin my life anymore,
everything you do, he adores.
stop ignoring him, stop trying to get his attention.
he's the only thing you mention.
you probably already won his heart,
but i think that we should part.

i cant take the pain i have everyday.
but all i do is pray.
nothing is working, ask if you may,
but i cant live like this.
you will probably be something to miss..

though you hurt my life and took everyone from me,
i still accepted who you were when you were nobody.
but i hope you two will live happily.

when i do tell you the day it is over,
it will be my happiest.
the pain will end and i will no more suffer.

goodbye, i wont miss you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emma Woods 28 August 2008

I think the end two verses of this poem are great and I can see it expresses a lot - When the one you love doesn't love you back we all know how painful it can be and no matter how long it takes your heart does mend itself in time - it has a lovely structure and is a piece of writing most people can relate to :)

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Floyd Minami 19 August 2008

sometimes no matter how much you love someone.. that person cant just love you back the same way, and being with the person who does not love you back is way lonelier than being alone... life must go on best wishes from: floyd minami

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