geisha's feet
petals curl up to
touch her soles
I remember the ashen look on your face when tinywords didn't publish it
What Linda says is absolutely right. there is an innocent sensuality in this perfect piece. F
lol! ! ! ...i had no idea what i had wrtten was profound enuf to evince such a soul wrenching response! ..at the risk of self-depreciation i would like to say..that poem was smply inspired by a frends callous proclamaton that im wicked...its an explanation of why, and on what terms i can accept that sort of criticism.
pretty. appreciate your feedback. ..could you perhaps explain to me what you meant by your comments about'wicked'
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sweet and succinct... your eyes may see the beauty, but it's your heart that pens the glory. I love the innocent sensuality of Caress Undercover.