Caring Not Sharing Poem by Kate Tovar

Caring Not Sharing

Rating: 4.5


as kids, adults tell us that 'sharing is caring'
what they don't tell us is that caring can be deadly, forgettingwe don't need coaching anymore

we free fall into life without knowing what to expect
helplessly hoping someone will catch us when we fall,
making decisions to depend on

Monday, May 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,caring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Caring is very important in life. Beautiful poem.

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Oratile Diratsagae 07 May 2018

I love it. Peace

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 May 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Kate. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan 14 May 2018

'we free fall into life without knowing what to expect helplessly hoping someone will catch us when we fall' - so true!

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 May 2018

we free fall into life without knowing what to expect helplessly hoping someone will catch us when we fall, Caring and sharing as virtues help us. to reflect on life..... a very good poem dear poetess. tony

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Chinedu Dike 08 May 2018

Really a poignant rendition set aside for sober reflection. An insightful creation elegantly crafted in persuasive expressions with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Kate and do remain enriched.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 May 2018

Dear Kate, such a superb poem👍👍👍

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Naila Rais 07 May 2018

A nice imagination... Keep it up.. I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too.. Naila

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