as kids, adults tell us that 'sharing is caring'
what they don't tell us is that caring can be deadly, forgettingwe don't need coaching anymore
we free fall into life without knowing what to expect
helplessly hoping someone will catch us when we fall,
making decisions to depend on
A good start with a nice poem, Kate. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
'we free fall into life without knowing what to expect helplessly hoping someone will catch us when we fall' - so true!
we free fall into life without knowing what to expect helplessly hoping someone will catch us when we fall, Caring and sharing as virtues help us. to reflect on life..... a very good poem dear poetess. tony
Really a poignant rendition set aside for sober reflection. An insightful creation elegantly crafted in persuasive expressions with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Kate and do remain enriched.
A nice imagination... Keep it up.. I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too.. Naila
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Caring is very important in life. Beautiful poem.