little wolf Emerson Brayfield

Rookie - 263 Points (July 12 1994 / Rochester New York)

Castle In The Clouds - Poem by little wolf Emerson Brayfield

in the fog
in the fog
what do i see
i see the tree lines
but to me i see a castle in the clouds
the way it looks to me is the fog in hiding the castle
that castle is in the clouds where you can see a new world
the world where everything is calm and no war is going on
you hear the sweet tweet of birds in the early spring
you hear the trickle of the stream
you see all green around you
this is the castle in the clouds


Comments about Castle In The Clouds by little wolf Emerson Brayfield

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/23/2016 3:33:00 PM)


    the way it looks to me is the fog in hiding the castle
    that castle is in the clouds where you can see a new world
    the world where everything is calm and no war is going on
    you hear the sweet tweet of birds in the early spring.....great imagination of a castle of hope in the skies up above.
    where there is no war or calamities. where there is only peace......... very fine thought and this is a poem of hope. thank you dear poet. God bless you. tony
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 17, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 18, 2012


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