Catatonia Poem by B3k Baylon

Catatonia

Rating: 4.5


I hate this sinking feeling...
Leaving my mind damn reeling
Like falling in an endless pit,
And no remedy just won't sit

Thinking of what seemed like abuse,
It all boils down to ego's misuse...
Caught in a web of pointless conceit,
I'm now covered with awful deceit

Down, down the deepest subconscious,
The soul lies helpless and unconscious
Now Telling me it s time to disconnect,
From the world of utter disrespect...

What lies hidden beneath the surface,
Struggles to come out a confined space
Like a rebel with all the rightful cause
it ain't gonna stop til free nor pause

Leaving the host without a single option,
A legion of demons rising in commotion
Soon it all has to end, this insanity...
Or later regret the sting of bitter reality

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jean Dament 27 May 2010

You described what it's like to be catatonic well in your poem here. An enjoyable read. Jeannie Spiritsong

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