Indranil Bhaduri

Rookie - 202 Points (Kolkata, India)

Caterpillar - Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

I gazed towards the window
And found a caterpillar crawling,
With eager thoughts in my heart
I kept myself staring.
From where did it come
And what questions does it throw,
I dreamt of the Garden of Eden
As my soul wished to know.
A sparkling day was ahead
After the dark veil,
To transform a crippled life
From dead feelings to real,
I felt a heavenly fragrance
And lit up my somber mind,
A butterfly was in the making
Leaving all the gloom behind.
I expressed my budding joy
With passionate notes on the lip,
As the newborn wings of illumination
Thus brightened the broken ship.

Copyright © 2013 Indranil Bhaduri

Comments about Caterpillar by Indranil Bhaduri

  • Gold Star - 39,259 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (5/11/2014 9:45:00 AM)

    The poem in its beauty of creative writing have such good ideas and observational talents and so very nice. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Rinki Nandy (1/7/2014 4:05:00 PM)

    lucky caterpillar good write self congratulatory (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 421 Points Shania K. Younce (10/5/2013 5:00:00 PM)

    I fine that the poem has detail. I've enjoyed reading it. I hope you write all the things you wish to write. It is a good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mini Sla (9/10/2013 8:39:00 AM)

    A lovely topic and well expressed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lauren A (9/8/2013 8:28:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem :) I love how it starts with something simple as a caterpillar, then it becomes something so beautifully wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mini Sla (9/2/2013 8:09:00 PM)

    Uplifting in every sense (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,156 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (8/24/2013 8:59:00 AM)

    I enjoyed your butterflys. We've had a good summer here in England with an abundace of the beautiful peacock
    butterfly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Linkous (8/15/2013 2:02:00 PM)

    Excellent imagery for looking forward to brighter days. I can relate. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 885 Points Kaila George (8/12/2013 11:55:00 PM)

    Oh my this is just beautiful...really it is sir....its beauty shown through out the whole of this wonderful write of yours...sigh...10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Bob Brown (8/12/2013 7:13:00 AM)

    Beautifully expressed..A change to a beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,211 Points Walterrean Salley (8/6/2013 10:15:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Indranil. Very interesting and insightful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 306 Points Tameeka Smith (8/5/2013 12:15:00 PM)

    This is so beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points R.j. Wynn (8/4/2013 4:15:00 PM)

    That's crazy good poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 299 Points Chandini Jaswal (8/3/2013 5:09:00 AM)

    You write lovely poems uncle.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 50,445 Points Roseann Shawiak (8/3/2013 12:27:00 AM)

    Very enlightening! I like this poem's expression of hope for the future - A butterfly was in the making. Always question everything, it brings depth to your poetry. Thank you for inviting me to read your poetry. Sorry it took so long. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,673 Points Unwritten Soul (8/3/2013 12:08:00 AM)

    Beautiful wording!
    Wearing mask of inner beauty always being mistakenly something not real us
    Till someone bare what lies inside thats how they see what true is
    and it will appear in physical slowly, ugly turn beauty when heart come to believe
    _SOul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Lalaine Rebamonte (8/2/2013 9:30:00 AM)

    I made me imagine a life cycle of a butterfly which means hope and faith for me. It was a good piece out from a direct observation from your environment. Just continue writing and I know you can express more in relating to the current issues in your country. That would also somehow enlighten others.(just an opinion) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sridatta Gupta (8/1/2013 12:35:00 AM)

    applauds.well penned (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/31/2013 5:19:00 AM)

    a transformation we all experience....from foetus to a bubbling baby that then takes wings and soars as a man. loved this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,692 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (7/31/2013 4:55:00 AM)

    you made the caterpillar so symbolic and you created a different interpretation of it
    very nice (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, July 22, 2013

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