Crescent Moon shining
as storm clouds tumble in rage
eclipse is obscured
This one stirs up the imagination immediately with the tumbling and provokes a lot of thought about the rage. Rage does spoil so many good things.
True said. haiku has the power to express in short a lot 10+++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Its surprising how much you got me to imagine without leaving the realms of a haiku